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Cambridge 11 Writing Task 1 Test 1 - Sample Answers (Band 9 to 4-5)
Real band 9, 8, 7 and 6.5 sample answers for this prompt, plus a genuine band 4-5 answer so you can see exactly what pulls a score down. Every sample comes with examiner-style notes on Task Achievement, Coherence & Cohesion, Lexical Resource and Grammatical Range & Accuracy.
The Prompt
Water Use by Region
The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The Data
Percentage of water used for different purposes, by region
North America: Industrial 48%, Agricultural 39%, Domestic 13%
South America: Industrial 19%, Agricultural 72%, Domestic 9%
Africa: Industrial 10%, Agricultural 84%, Domestic 6%
Central Asia: Industrial 5%, Agricultural 88%, Domestic 7%
Europe: Industrial 32%, Agricultural 53%, Domestic 15%
South East Asia: Industrial 12%, Agricultural 81%, Domestic 7%
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179 wordsCorrectly identifies North America as the one exception to an otherwise consistent regional pattern.
The charts compare the proportion of water used for industrial, agricultural and domestic purposes across six regions of the world.
Overall, agriculture was the dominant use of water in every region except North America, where industrial use was instead the largest category, and domestic use was consistently the smallest proportion everywhere.
Agricultural use ranged from a high of 88% in Central Asia and 84% in Africa, down to just 39% in North America, the only region where it did not account for the majority of water use. South East Asia and South America followed a similar pattern to Africa and Central Asia, with agriculture consuming 81% and 72% of water respectively.
North America stood out with industrial use at 48%, far higher than any other region, and higher than its own agricultural use of 39%. Europe had the most balanced distribution of the six regions, with agriculture at 53%, industry at 32%, and domestic use at 15%, the highest domestic figure recorded. Domestic use otherwise stayed within a narrow band of 6% to 9% across the remaining four regions.
Examiner Notes
Task Achievement: Covers all six regions with a precise overview identifying North America as the sole exception to the agriculture-dominant pattern, and Europe's comparatively balanced distribution is flagged as the other genuinely notable feature.
Coherence & Cohesion: A clear overview precedes detail organised by category, with cohesive devices ("however", "otherwise") linking the regions naturally.
Lexical Resource: Precise, varied language ("dominant use", "stood out", "a narrow band") used accurately throughout.
Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Wide range of accurate structures, including superlatives and complex comparatives, used with full control.
Band 8
159 wordsAccurate and clearly organised, just slightly less sharply focused in its overview than a band 9 answer.
The chart shows how water was used for three different purposes, industrial, agricultural and domestic, in six regions around the world.
Overall, agriculture used the largest share of water in five of the six regions, with North America being the only exception, where industrial use was actually higher than agricultural use.
Agricultural use was highest in Central Asia at 88% and Africa at 84%, and also very high in South East Asia at 81% and South America at 72%. In contrast, North America used only 39% of its water for agriculture, much lower than the other regions.
Instead, North America used 48% of its water for industry, the highest industrial figure of all six regions. Europe had a more even split between the three categories than any other region, with 53% for agriculture, 32% for industry and 15% for domestic use, which was also the highest domestic percentage recorded. The remaining regions all had domestic use of below 10%.
Examiner Notes
Task Achievement: Covers all six regions accurately with a clear overview naming North America as the exception, though Europe's balanced distribution is reported a little later and with slightly less emphasis than in the band 9 answer.
Coherence & Cohesion: Clearly organised with an overview followed by grouped detail; "Instead" and "In contrast" mark comparisons effectively.
Lexical Resource: Good range of vocabulary for comparison, though "a more even split" is slightly less precise than "the most balanced distribution".
Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Accurate throughout, with a good mix of simple and complex sentence structures.
Band 7
155 wordsAll figures are correct and the exception is identified, but the overview reads more like a summary than an analysis.
The chart gives information about how water is used for three purposes, industrial, agricultural and domestic, in six different regions of the world.
Overall, most regions used the largest amount of their water for agriculture, except for North America, which used more water for industry instead.
Central Asia and Africa had the highest agricultural use, at 88% and 84%. South East Asia and South America were also high, at 81% and 72%. North America was different, with only 39% used for agriculture and 48% used for industry, which was the highest industrial figure of all the regions.
Europe had a more balanced use of water than the other regions, with 53% for agriculture, 32% for industry, and 15% for domestic use. Domestic use was generally low everywhere, staying below 10% in most of the other regions. This suggests that industrial and domestic use are relatively minor compared with agriculture across most of the world's regions.
Examiner Notes
Task Achievement: Reports all six regions accurately with a basic overview identifying the North America exception, though the overview is a plain restatement rather than a fully analytical summary.
Coherence & Cohesion: Clearly organised by region, though transitions rely on simple contrast markers ("except for", "was different") repeated across paragraphs.
Lexical Resource: Adequate range for the task; figures are accurate but connecting language stays fairly plain throughout.
Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Generally accurate, mostly simple sentence structures; meaning is always clear.
Band 6.5
151 wordsThe figures are all correct, but agreement errors appear in almost every sentence.
The chart give information about how water is use for three purpose, industrial, agricultural and domestic, in six different region of the world.
Overall, most region use the largest amount of water for agriculture, except for North America, which use more water for industry instead.
Central Asia and Africa have highest agricultural use, at 88% and 84%. South East Asia and South America also high, at 81% and 72%. North America is different, with only 39% use for agriculture and 48% use for industry, which is highest industrial figure of all the region.
Europe have more balanced use of water than other region, with 53% for agriculture, 32% for industry, and 15% for domestic use. Domestic use is generally low everywhere, stay below 10% in most of other region. This show that industrial and domestic use is relatively minor compare with agriculture, especially when compare to industry level in North America.
Examiner Notes
Task Achievement: Reports all six regions accurately with a basic overview naming the North America exception, matching the content of the band 7 answer.
Coherence & Cohesion: Clearly organised by region, following the same structure as the higher-band answers.
Lexical Resource: Limited by "region" and "purpose" being used as both singular and plural throughout instead of their plural forms.
Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Frequent subject-verb agreement errors ("chart give", "is use", "region use", "Central Asia and Africa have", "Europe have", "stay below") appear in nearly every sentence.
Band 4-5 - What to Avoid
60 wordsTwo whole regions are missing entirely, and it closes with a personal reaction rather than a report.
This chart show water use in six place. Most place use water for farm most. Only North America use more for industry.
Africa and Central Asia use very much water for farm, almost 90%.
Europe is different, water is more equal between farm, industry and home use, this is more balance than other place I think, quite interesting to compare.
Examiner Notes
Task Achievement: Only two of the six regions get any real figures at all, South East Asia and South America are not mentioned, and the closing comment ("quite interesting to compare") is a personal reaction that has no place in a Task 1 report. At well under 150 words, the response is also underlength.
Coherence & Cohesion: Reads as a short list of remarks about individual regions rather than an organised comparison across all six.
Lexical Resource: Vague, repetitive vocabulary ("place", "use" repeated constantly) in place of the specific category names given in the chart.
Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Frequent errors throughout ("chart show", "Most place use", "Africa and Central Asia use very much water").
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