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Cambridge 11 Writing Task 2 Test 3 - Sample Answers (Band 9 to 4-5)

Real band 9, 8, 7 and 6.5 sample answers for this prompt, plus a genuine band 4-5 answer so you can see exactly what pulls a score down. Every sample comes with examiner-style notes on Task Response, Coherence & Cohesion, Lexical Resource and Grammatical Range & Accuracy.

The Prompt

Reasons for Learning a Foreign Language

Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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Band 9

262 words

Uses genuine personal experience to make its case for the cultural and cognitive value of language learning concrete.

Whether the sole justification for learning a foreign language is practical, namely travel or employment, or whether the benefits extend further is a question I have direct experience with, and I firmly believe the practical view captures only a fraction of what language learning offers.

The practical case is certainly compelling. Being able to work in a foreign country dramatically expands someone's career opportunities, and being able to communicate while travelling makes the experience richer and often safer, since a traveller who can read signs or ask for help is far less vulnerable than one who cannot. For many learners, these tangible benefits are the initial motivation that gets them started.

However, reducing language learning to these two purposes overlooks its deeper cognitive and cultural value. Studies have consistently shown that bilingualism improves memory, multitasking ability, and even delays the onset of age-related cognitive decline, benefits that have nothing to do with travel or work. Language also functions as a gateway to culture in a way that translation cannot fully replicate. Having learned Japanese myself without ever intending to work in Japan, I found that understanding the language revealed nuances in its literature and humour that would have remained completely invisible through translated versions alone.

In conclusion, while travel and career opportunities are valid and common motivations, they represent only the most visible layer of what language learning provides, and the cognitive and cultural benefits alone would justify the effort even without ever leaving one's home country, a point that is easy to overlook amid the practical focus of most language courses.

Examiner Notes

Task Response: Fully discusses both views with genuine balance before reaching a clear, well-justified opinion, and the personal example of learning Japanese gives the argument real, specific weight.

Coherence & Cohesion: Each paragraph carries a distinct function, and cohesive devices ("however", "in conclusion") link them naturally throughout.

Lexical Resource: Wide range of precise vocabulary ("cognitive decline", "gateway to culture", "nuances") used with natural collocation.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Wide range of complex structures, including relative clauses and non-finite clauses, used with full accuracy.

Band 8

254 words

A well-balanced discussion let down only slightly by more general supporting evidence than a band 9 answer.

Some people believe that the only good reason to learn a foreign language is to travel or work abroad, while others think there are many more reasons to learn a language. In this essay, I will discuss both views before giving my opinion.

Those who focus on travel and work have a reasonable point. Being able to speak another language clearly helps when travelling, since it makes communication easier and can make the experience more enjoyable and less stressful. It can also open up job opportunities, especially in international companies that need employees who can communicate with clients or colleagues in other countries.

However, other people argue that language learning has benefits beyond travel and work. Research has shown that learning a new language can improve memory and general brain function, which is useful regardless of whether someone ever travels or works abroad. Language is also closely connected to culture, and learning a language can help someone understand books, films and traditions from another country far more deeply than they could through translation alone.

In my opinion, while travel and career benefits are important and valid reasons, I agree that they are not the only reasons to learn a language, since the cognitive and cultural benefits are valuable on their own.

In conclusion, both views have merit, but I believe the reasons for learning a language go well beyond simply preparing for travel or a job abroad. Schools and universities could do more to highlight these wider benefits when encouraging students to study languages.

Examiner Notes

Task Response: Fully discusses both views with a clear, well-supported opinion, though the reasoning stays slightly more general than the band 9 answer's personal example.

Coherence & Cohesion: Clear five-paragraph structure with accurate cohesive devices throughout.

Lexical Resource: Good range of vocabulary, mostly precise, though "far more deeply" is a little less specific than the higher-band answer's concrete illustration.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Mostly accurate complex sentences with only rare minor slips.

Band 7

260 words

A clear, balanced discussion that would be stronger with one concrete example to anchor its argument.

Some people think the only reason to learn a foreign language is for travelling or working in another country, while other people think there are more reasons than just this. I will discuss both views and then give my opinion.

People who think travel and work are the only reasons believe that learning a language takes a lot of time and effort, so it should have a clear practical purpose. For example, if someone is planning to work in another country, learning that country's language will obviously help them communicate with colleagues and do their job better. Without this practical need, some people might never feel motivated enough to spend the time required to become fluent.

On the other hand, other people believe language learning has other benefits too. Learning a new language can help improve memory and thinking skills, and it can also help someone understand a different culture better, such as through books, films or music, which is possible without ever travelling to that country. Many people also enjoy the personal challenge of learning something new, regardless of any practical use it might have.

In my opinion, I agree that travel and work are common reasons for learning a language, but I don't think they are the only good reasons, because understanding a culture and improving your brain are also valuable benefits. Both types of reason are equally valid depending on the individual person's goals.

In conclusion, both views make sense, but I believe there are clearly more reasons to learn a language than just travel and work.

Examiner Notes

Task Response: Discusses both views and gives a clear opinion, but the supporting reasoning stays fairly general, without a specific example the way the higher-band answers use one.

Coherence & Cohesion: Organised clearly with one paragraph per view; cohesive devices ("On the other hand", "In conclusion") are accurate but predictable.

Lexical Resource: Adequate range for the task, with some repetition of "reasons" and "learning" throughout.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Generally accurate mix of simple and complex sentences; meaning is always clear.

Band 6.5

258 words

The discussion is well balanced, but agreement errors on nearly every key task word noticeably lower the score.

Some people think the only reason to learn foreign language is for travelling or working in another country, while other people think there are more reason than just this. I will discuss both view and then give my opinion. This is common topic that many student and teacher talk about today.

People who think travel and work is only reason believe that learning language take a lot of time and effort, so it should have clear practical purpose. For example, if someone is planning to work in another country, learning that country language will obviously help them communicate with colleague and do their job better. Without this practical need, some people might never feel motivated enough to spend time require to become fluent.

On other hand, other people believe language learning have other benefit too. Learning new language can help improve memory and thinking skill, and it can also help someone understand different culture better, such as through book, film or music, which is possible without ever travelling to that country. Many people also enjoy personal challenge of learning something new, regardless of any practical use it might have.

In my opinion, I agree that travel and work is common reason for learning language, but I don't think they are only good reason, because understanding culture and improving your brain is also valuable benefit. Both type of reason is equally valid depend on individual person goal.

In conclusion, both view make sense, but I believe there is clearly more reason to learn language than just travel and work.

Examiner Notes

Task Response: Discusses both views and gives a clear opinion, matching the content of the band 7 answer, but grammar errors throughout reduce clarity.

Coherence & Cohesion: Follows the same one-paragraph-per-view structure as the higher-band answers.

Lexical Resource: Limited by missing plurals on key task words ("reason", "language", "view") used throughout instead of their plural forms.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Frequent subject-verb agreement errors ("reason to learn foreign language", "work is only reason", "learning language take", "language learning have", "both view make sense") appear on nearly every sentence.

Band 4-5 - What to Avoid

67 words

Names both views but never actually discusses either one in any depth.

Some people think language is only for travel or job. Other people think language have more use than this.

I think language can help understand culture and movie from other country, this is also good reason.

But travel and job is still main reason I think, most people learn language for this.

In conclusion I think both reason are good, this is my opinion about this topic.

Examiner Notes

Task Response: Both views are named but neither is properly discussed, each gets a single unsupported sentence, so the instruction to "discuss both views" is not really fulfilled. At well under 250 words, the response is also underlength.

Coherence & Cohesion: Paragraphs list opinions without connecting them into a developing argument.

Lexical Resource: Extremely basic and repetitive vocabulary ("good", "reason", "think") with no attempt at more varied language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Frequent errors, including missing plurals and subject-verb agreement ("language have more use", "travel and job is still main reason").

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These sample answers are written independently for Prep IELTS Now to illustrate real band-score differences. They are a study aid, not official Cambridge or IELTS material.