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Cambridge 12 Writing Task 2 Test 2 - Sample Answers (Band 9 to 4-5)
Real band 9, 8, 7 and 6.5 sample answers for this prompt, plus a genuine band 4-5 answer so you can see exactly what pulls a score down. Every sample comes with examiner-style notes on Task Response, Coherence & Cohesion, Lexical Resource and Grammatical Range & Accuracy.
The Prompt
Home Ownership vs Renting
In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
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270 wordsUses two contrasting real countries to show the cultural emphasis on ownership is a choice, not an inevitability.
In many cultures, buying a home rather than renting one is treated almost as a life milestone, and I believe this attitude stems from a mix of genuine financial logic and deeper cultural expectations, though I see it as a mixed rather than purely positive situation.
The financial reasoning is straightforward: a mortgage payment eventually builds equity in an asset the owner can sell or pass on, whereas rent is money that never returns to the tenant. In countries with rising property prices, such as the UK, buying early can also be a hedge against future price increases that would otherwise make homeownership unaffordable later in life. Beyond finance, homeownership often carries social weight, seen as proof of stability, adulthood, or success, particularly in societies where it is closely tied to marriage or family expectations.
However, I view this emphasis as a mixed blessing rather than an unambiguous good. The pressure to own a home can trap people in significant, decades-long debt, discourage geographic mobility for better job opportunities, and in cities with extremely high property prices, push young people to delay major life decisions or take on financial risks they cannot comfortably manage. Countries like Germany, where renting is culturally normalised and comes with strong tenant protections, demonstrate that a stable, satisfying life is entirely possible without home ownership, suggesting the emphasis found elsewhere is more cultural than strictly necessary.
In conclusion, while homeownership offers real financial and psychological benefits, I believe the intense cultural pressure surrounding it in some countries creates genuine downsides, and a society with strong renter protections, like Germany's, shows there is a healthier alternative.
Examiner Notes
Task Response: Fully answers both parts of the question (why homeownership matters, and whether this is positive or negative) with a clear, nuanced position, and specific country examples (UK, Germany) give the argument real substance.
Coherence & Cohesion: Each paragraph carries a distinct function, and cohesive devices ("however", "in conclusion") link them naturally throughout.
Lexical Resource: Wide range of precise vocabulary ("equity", "a hedge against", "normalised") used with natural collocation.
Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Wide range of complex structures, including relative clauses and non-finite clauses, used with full accuracy.
Band 8
269 wordsWell argued with a specific example, just slightly less tightly integrated than a band 9 answer.
In many countries, owning a home is seen as much more important than renting one, and I believe there are both practical and cultural reasons for this, though I think it creates a somewhat mixed situation overall.
One practical reason is that homeownership is often seen as a good long-term investment, since monthly mortgage payments eventually result in owning a valuable asset, unlike rent, which is simply paid out with nothing to show for it afterward. There is also a strong cultural element in many societies, where owning a home is seen as a sign of success, stability, and being a responsible adult, especially once someone gets married or starts a family.
However, I don't think this emphasis on ownership is entirely positive. Many people take on very large amounts of debt to buy a home, sometimes for periods of twenty or thirty years, and this can limit their freedom to move for a better job or a different lifestyle. In countries like Germany, where renting is much more common and normal, and where tenants have strong legal protections, people seem to live happily without feeling pressured to own property. This suggests that the intense pressure to own a home in some societies is more a matter of cultural expectation than genuine necessity, and that governments could do more to make long-term renting a secure and respected option.
In conclusion, while owning a home has genuine financial and social benefits, I believe the strong cultural pressure to own property in some countries can create unnecessary stress, and examples like Germany show that renting can be a perfectly good alternative.
Examiner Notes
Task Response: Fully answers both parts of the question with a clear, well-supported opinion and a relevant example (Germany), though the reasoning is slightly less tightly integrated than the band 9 answer's.
Coherence & Cohesion: Clear structure with an accurate "However" pivot and a well-signposted conclusion.
Lexical Resource: Good range of vocabulary, though "much more common and normal" is slightly less precise than "culturally normalised".
Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Mostly accurate complex sentences with only rare minor slips.
Band 7
263 wordsA clear, balanced answer that would be stronger with one concrete example to anchor its reasoning.
In many countries, people think owning a home is much more important than renting one. I think there are some clear reasons for this, and I will explain whether I think this is a good or bad situation.
One reason people want to own a home is that it can be a good investment, because the value of the house might increase over time, and the money spent on a mortgage eventually leads to actually owning something valuable. Also, in many cultures, owning a home is seen as a sign that someone is successful and responsible, especially after they get married or have children.
However, I think this situation also has some negative sides. Many people have to borrow a large amount of money to buy a house, and this debt can take twenty or thirty years to pay off completely, which can be very stressful. It can also make it harder for people to move to a different city if they get a better job opportunity somewhere else. In addition, some people feel forced into buying a home earlier than they are ready for, simply because they worry that prices will keep rising and become unaffordable in the future.
In my opinion, I think this is a mixed situation rather than a completely positive or negative one, because while owning a home has clear benefits, the pressure and debt involved can also cause real problems for many people.
In conclusion, owning a home has both advantages and disadvantages, and I don't think it should always be seen as more important than renting.
Examiner Notes
Task Response: Answers both parts of the question with a clear position, but no specific real-world example is used to support the reasoning, unlike in the higher-band answers.
Coherence & Cohesion: Organised logically with one clear idea per paragraph; cohesive devices ("However", "In conclusion") are accurate but predictable.
Lexical Resource: Adequate range for the task, with some repetition of "important" and "owning" throughout.
Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Generally accurate mix of simple and complex sentences; meaning is always clear.
Band 6.5
268 wordsThe reasoning is sound and balanced, but agreement errors on nearly every key task word noticeably lower the score.
In many country, people think owning home is much more important than renting one. I think there is some clear reason for this, and I will explain whether I think this is good or bad situation.
One reason people want to own home is that it can be good investment, because value of house might increase over time, and money spent on mortgage eventually lead to actually owning something valuable. Also, in many culture, owning home is seen as sign that someone is successful and responsible, especially after they get married or have children. Owning home also give people feeling of security, because they no longer need to worry about landlord increase rent or ask them to leave property.
However, I think this situation also have some negative side. Many people have to borrow large amount of money to buy house, and this debt can take twenty or thirty year to pay off completely, which can be very stressful. It can also make it harder for people to move to different city if they get better job opportunity somewhere else. In addition, some people feel force into buying home earlier than they are ready for, simply because they worry that price will keep rising and become unaffordable in future.
In my opinion, I think this is mixed situation rather than completely positive or negative one, because while owning home have clear benefit, the pressure and debt involve can also cause real problem for many people.
In conclusion, owning home have both advantage and disadvantage, and I don't think it should always be seen as more important than renting.
Examiner Notes
Task Response: Answers both parts of the question with a clear position, matching the content of the band 7 answer, but grammar errors throughout reduce clarity.
Coherence & Cohesion: Follows the same one-idea-per-paragraph structure as the higher-band answers.
Lexical Resource: Limited by missing plurals on key task words ("country", "culture", "advantage") used throughout instead of their plural forms.
Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Frequent subject-verb agreement errors ("people think owning home is", "money... eventually lead", "this situation also have", "debt can take twenty or thirty year", "owning home have") appear on nearly every sentence.
Band 4-5 - What to Avoid
48 wordsStates a position but never develops either half of the question, and stays well under the required length.
Owning home is important for many people. It show you are success in life.
But house is expensive, people must pay bank for long time, this is hard for some family.
I think owning home is good but also have problem, this is my opinion about this topic.
Examiner Notes
Task Response: The question of why ownership matters and whether it is positive or negative is barely addressed, each idea gets one short, unsupported sentence with no real explanation. At well under 250 words, the response is also underlength.
Coherence & Cohesion: Paragraphs are short, disconnected statements with minimal linking beyond "But".
Lexical Resource: Vocabulary is basic and repetitive ("good", "important", "problem" used with little variation).
Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Frequent errors throughout ("It show you are success", "people must pay bank", "also have problem").
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