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Cambridge 18 Writing Task 2 Test 2 - Sample Answers (Band 9 to 4-5)
Real band 9, 8, 7 and 6.5 sample answers for this prompt, plus a genuine band 4-5 answer so you can see exactly what pulls a score down. Every sample comes with examiner-style notes on Task Response, Coherence & Cohesion, Lexical Resource and Grammatical Range & Accuracy.
The Prompt
University Study - Breadth vs Specialisation
Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
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293 wordsProposes a genuine subject-dependent framework rather than simply agreeing with one of the two given views.
There is disagreement over whether university students should broaden their education by studying subjects outside their main field, or whether they should devote all their time and attention exclusively to their chosen qualification; I will discuss both views before giving my own opinion.
Those who favour a broader education argue that exposure to other disciplines produces more well-rounded graduates who can think creatively and draw connections across fields, skills that are increasingly valued by employers in a rapidly changing job market. A computer science student who also studies psychology, for example, may be better equipped to design genuinely user-friendly software than one who has studied programming exclusively, since understanding how people think and behave is directly relevant to good design.
On the other hand, those who favour specialisation argue that many fields, particularly technical and scientific ones, have become so complex that mastering them fully requires undivided attention and time. A medical or engineering student, for instance, may simply have too much essential material to learn within their core subject to justify diverting significant time towards unrelated disciplines, and doing so risks producing graduates who are only superficially competent in their primary field.
In my opinion, the right balance depends heavily on the subject and the student's career goals. For highly technical, rapidly evolving fields where depth of expertise is essential, I believe focused specialisation is generally more valuable, whereas for fields where creativity, communication, and broad problem-solving matter more, some breadth of study can be genuinely beneficial rather than a distraction.
In conclusion, while both approaches have genuine merit, I believe the ideal degree of specialisation should be determined by the specific demands of a student's chosen field rather than being treated as a universal rule that applies equally to every discipline.
Examiner Notes
Task Response: Fully discusses both views in depth and gives a clear, well-developed opinion that proposes a subject-dependent framework rather than simply picking a side.
Coherence & Cohesion: Ideas progress logically from one view to the other to a synthesised opinion, with cohesive devices ("on the other hand", "in my opinion") managing each shift smoothly.
Lexical Resource: Wide range of precise vocabulary ("undivided attention", "superficially competent", "synthesised") used with natural collocation throughout.
Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Wide range of complex structures, including concession clauses, used with full accuracy.
Band 8
258 wordsClearly argued with a genuine subject-dependent opinion, just slightly more general in its supporting detail than a band 9 answer.
There is debate about whether university students should study other subjects in addition to their main subject, or focus all their time on their main qualification. I will discuss both views before giving my opinion.
Those who support a broader education argue that learning about other subjects helps students become more well-rounded and creative, which employers often value. For example, a computer science student who also studies psychology might design more user-friendly software, since understanding how people think is useful for good design.
On the other hand, those who support specialisation argue that many subjects, especially technical ones, are so complex that they require full attention to master properly. A medical student, for example, may have too much important material to learn in their main subject to spend significant time on unrelated subjects, and doing so might mean they do not learn their main subject deeply enough.
In my opinion, the right balance depends on the subject and the student's goals. For very technical subjects, I think focusing mainly on the main subject makes more sense, but for other subjects, studying additional topics can be genuinely useful.
In conclusion, both views have real merit, but I believe how much a student should specialise depends on their specific subject rather than being the same for everyone. Universities themselves could also help by offering more flexible programmes that allow students in technical fields to take a small number of outside courses without significantly reducing the time available for their core subject, allowing students to gain some breadth without sacrificing depth.
Examiner Notes
Task Response: Fully discusses both views with a clear opinion, though the reasoning is slightly more general than the band 9 answer's.
Coherence & Cohesion: Clear five-paragraph structure with accurate cohesive devices throughout.
Lexical Resource: Good range of vocabulary, though "genuinely useful" is more general than the higher-band answer's more precise phrasing.
Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Mostly accurate complex sentences with only rare minor slips.
Band 7
250 wordsA clear, well-reasoned discussion that would be stronger with the medical-student example developed further.
Some people think university students should study other subjects as well as their main subject. Others think students should focus completely on their main subject. I will discuss both views.
People who agree with the first view say that learning about other subjects makes students more well-rounded and creative, which can help them in their future career. For example, someone who studies computer science and also psychology might understand users better.
People who agree with the second view say that some subjects are very complex and need a lot of focus to learn properly. For example, a medical student needs to learn a huge amount of information, so they might not have time to study other subjects as well.
In my opinion, I think it depends on the subject. For very technical subjects, I think focusing on the main subject is better, but for other subjects, learning extra things can be helpful.
In conclusion, both views have good points, but I believe the right choice depends on what subject the student is studying. Universities could also help students by offering more flexible programmes, so that students in very technical subjects can still take a small number of courses outside their main subject without spending too much time away from their core studies. This kind of flexible approach might allow more students to enjoy some of the benefits of a broader education, such as improved creativity and communication skills, without giving up the deep knowledge they need in their chosen field.
Examiner Notes
Task Response: Discusses both views with a clear opinion, but the opinion is not developed in as much depth as in the higher-band answers.
Coherence & Cohesion: Organised logically with each view in a separate paragraph followed by an opinion; cohesive devices are accurate but predictable.
Lexical Resource: Adequate range for the task, with some repetition of "subject" and "study" throughout.
Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Generally accurate mix of simple and complex sentences; meaning is always clear.
Band 6.5
250 wordsBoth views and the opinion are addressed clearly, but agreement errors on nearly every key task word noticeably lower the score.
Some people think university student should study other subject as well as their main subject. Others think student should focus completely on their main subject. I will discuss both view.
People who agree with the first view say that learning about other subject make student more well-rounded and creative, which can help them in their future career. For example, someone who study computer science and also psychology might understand user better.
People who agree with the second view say that some subject is very complex and need a lot of focus to learn properly. For example, a medical student need to learn a huge amount of information, so they might not have time to study other subject as well.
In my opinion, I think it depend on the subject. For very technical subject, I think focusing on the main subject is better, but for other subject, learning extra thing can be helpful.
In conclusion, both view have good point, but I believe the right choice depend on what subject the student is studying. University could also help student by offering more flexible programme, so that student in very technical subject can still take a small number of course outside their main subject without spending too much time away from their core study. This kind of flexible approach might allow more student to enjoy some of the benefit of a broader education, such as improved creativity and communication skill, without giving up the deep knowledge they need in their chosen field.
Examiner Notes
Task Response: Discusses both views with a clear opinion, matching the content of the band 7 answer, but grammar errors throughout reduce clarity.
Coherence & Cohesion: Follows the same five-part structure as the higher-band answers.
Lexical Resource: Limited by missing plurals on key task words ("subject", "view", "thing") used throughout instead of their plural forms.
Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Frequent subject-verb agreement errors ("student should", "it depend on", "choice depend") appear on nearly every sentence.
Band 4-5 - What to Avoid
30 wordsNever genuinely explains either view and gives no real opinion, and stays well under the required length.
I think student should study main subject only.
But learning other thing also good sometimes, this is difficult question.
It depends I think, this is my opinion about this topic.
Examiner Notes
Task Response: Neither view is genuinely explained or developed, and no real personal opinion is given, so the discuss-both-views task is not addressed. At well under 250 words, the response is also underlength.
Coherence & Cohesion: Paragraphs are short, disconnected statements with minimal linking.
Lexical Resource: Vocabulary is basic and repetitive ("think", "good", "depends") with little variation.
Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Frequent errors throughout ("student should study", "it depends I think").
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