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Cambridge 19 Writing Task 1 Test 2 - Sample Answers (Band 9 to 4-5)
Real band 9, 8, 7 and 6.5 sample answers for this prompt, plus a genuine band 4-5 answer so you can see exactly what pulls a score down. Every sample comes with examiner-style notes on Task Achievement, Coherence & Cohesion, Lexical Resource and Grammatical Range & Accuracy.
The Prompt
Porth Harbour: 2000 vs Today
The plans below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The Data
Porth Harbour - key features: 2000 vs today
Main road access: 2000: present (northern edge) → Today: present (unchanged)
Northern waterfront: 2000: fishing boats area → Today: passenger ferry terminal
Central area: 2000: open harbour water → Today: marina for private yachts
Southern waterfront: 2000: passenger ferry terminal → Today: public beach
Eastern side: 2000: lighthouse → Today: lighthouse (retained)
Western side: 2000: car park → Today: car park (retained)
Overall character: 2000: working fishing harbour → Today: leisure and tourism focus
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177 wordsIdentifies the specific swap between the northern and southern waterfronts rather than only listing seven separate changes.
The plans compare Porth Harbour's layout in 2000 with how it looks today.
Overall, the harbour has been transformed from a working fishing port into a leisure and tourism destination, with several waterfront areas swapping their original functions entirely, while road access, the lighthouse, and the car park have remained unchanged throughout.
In 2000, the northern waterfront was used by fishing boats, while the southern waterfront housed the passenger ferry terminal, and the central area consisted of open harbour water. The eastern side had a lighthouse and the western side a car park, both alongside the main road access on the northern edge.
Today, these functions have shifted considerably. The northern waterfront, once for fishing boats, now hosts the passenger ferry terminal, effectively swapping places with the southern waterfront, which has itself become a public beach. The central area, previously open water, is now a marina for private yachts. Meanwhile, the lighthouse, car park, and main road access remain exactly as they were, the only three features left untouched by this broader shift towards leisure and tourism.
Examiner Notes
Task Achievement: Accurately covers all seven features with a precise overview identifying the genuinely notable swap between the northern and southern waterfronts.
Coherence & Cohesion: A clear overview precedes detail organised by former layout then current layout, with cohesive devices ("meanwhile", "effectively swapping") linking naturally.
Lexical Resource: Precise, varied language ("transformed", "untouched", "broader shift") used accurately throughout.
Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Wide range of accurate structures, including present perfect passive forms used appropriately.
Band 8
156 wordsAccurate and clearly organised, just slightly less varied in its vocabulary than a band 9 answer.
The plans show Porth Harbour in 2000 and how it looks today.
Overall, the harbour has changed from a working fishing port into a place for leisure and tourism, with several areas changing their use completely, while the road, lighthouse, and car park have stayed the same.
In 2000, the northern waterfront was used by fishing boats, the southern waterfront had the passenger ferry terminal, and the central area was open harbour water. The eastern side had a lighthouse and the western side had a car park.
Today, the northern waterfront has become the passenger ferry terminal, while the southern waterfront, which used to have the ferry terminal, is now a public beach. The central area is now a marina for private yachts. The lighthouse, car park, and road access have not changed. These changes together suggest that the harbour's whole purpose has shifted decisively away from fishing and towards attracting visitors for recreation and tourism.
Examiner Notes
Task Achievement: Covers all seven features accurately with a clear overview, including the three unchanged features, though described a little more simply than in the band 9 answer.
Coherence & Cohesion: Clearly organised with an overview followed by detail grouped by former and current layout; cohesive devices are accurate throughout.
Lexical Resource: Good range of vocabulary for describing change, though slightly less varied than the higher-band answer's phrasing.
Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Accurate throughout, with a good mix of simple and complex sentence structures, including passive forms.
Band 7
153 wordsThe main features are correctly reported, but the swap between the northern and southern waterfronts is only loosely implied.
The plans show Porth Harbour in 2000 and today.
Overall, the harbour has changed a lot, from a fishing harbour to a place for leisure, but some things have stayed the same.
In 2000, fishing boats used the northern waterfront, and the ferry terminal was in the south. The centre was open water, and there was a lighthouse and a car park.
Today, the ferry terminal has moved to the north, and the south is now a beach. The centre is now a marina. The lighthouse, car park, and road have not changed. These changes together show that the harbour has moved away from its original purpose as a working fishing port and has instead become a place designed mainly for tourists and leisure activities, while still keeping a few of its original features exactly as they were before. The overall redevelopment reflects a broader shift toward tourism seen in many coastal towns.
Examiner Notes
Task Achievement: Reports the main features accurately with a basic overview, but the overview does not clearly identify the swap between the two waterfronts the way the higher-band answers do.
Coherence & Cohesion: Clearly organised by former layout then current layout, though features are listed with fairly plain connecting language throughout.
Lexical Resource: Adequate range for the task; figures are accurate but connecting language stays fairly plain throughout.
Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Generally accurate, mostly simple sentence structures; meaning is always clear.
Band 6.5
153 wordsThe main features are all correctly reported, but agreement errors appear in almost every sentence.
The plan show Porth Harbour in 2000 and today.
Overall, the harbour have changed a lot, from a fishing harbour to a place for leisure, but some thing have stayed the same.
In 2000, fishing boat used the northern waterfront, and the ferry terminal was in the south. The centre was open water, and there was a lighthouse and a car park.
Today, the ferry terminal have moved to the north, and the south is now a beach. The centre is now a marina. The lighthouse, car park, and road has not change. This change together show that the harbour have moved away from its original purpose as a working fishing port and has instead become a place design mainly for tourist and leisure activity, while still keeping a few of its original feature exactly as they were before. The overall redevelopment reflect a broader shift toward tourism seen in many coastal town.
Examiner Notes
Task Achievement: Reports the main features accurately, matching the content of the band 7 answer.
Coherence & Cohesion: Clearly organised by former and current layout, following the same structure as the higher-band answers.
Lexical Resource: Limited by "boat" and "thing" being used without their plural forms throughout.
Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Frequent subject-verb agreement errors ("plan show", "harbour have changed", "road has not change") appear in nearly every sentence.
Band 4-5 - What to Avoid
30 wordsFive of the seven listed features are missing entirely, and a personal opinion is inserted into what should be a factual report.
This plan show harbour before and after.
They add beach and marina, this is nice change I think.
Harbour is more fun now, this is my opinion about this plan.
Examiner Notes
Task Achievement: Only two of the seven listed features (the beach and the marina) are mentioned, five features including the ferry terminal swap, the lighthouse, and the car park are missing entirely, and a personal opinion is inserted, which has no place in a Task 1 report. At well under 150 words, the response is also underlength.
Coherence & Cohesion: Reads as disconnected remarks rather than an organised comparison of the two plans.
Lexical Resource: Vague, repetitive vocabulary ("nice change", "more fun") used instead of the specific features named on the plans.
Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Frequent errors throughout ("this plan show", "harbour is more fun now").
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