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Cambridge 19 Writing Task 2 Test 4 - Sample Answers (Band 9 to 4-5)

Real band 9, 8, 7 and 6.5 sample answers for this prompt, plus a genuine band 4-5 answer so you can see exactly what pulls a score down. Every sample comes with examiner-style notes on Task Response, Coherence & Cohesion, Lexical Resource and Grammatical Range & Accuracy.

The Prompt

Buying Food from Around the World

In many countries nowadays, consumers can go to a supermarket and buy food produced all over the world.

Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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Band 9

284 words

Explains two distinct costs, carbon emissions and threats to local farming, rather than only citing one general environmental concern.

Modern supermarkets now routinely stock food imported from every corner of the globe, and while this offers genuine benefits to consumers, I believe the environmental costs of this development make it, on balance, a negative one.

There are clear benefits to this global food trade. Consumers now enjoy access to a far greater variety of foods year-round than would be possible if they relied solely on local, seasonal produce, and this global competition among food producers has often helped keep prices lower than they would otherwise be, benefiting household budgets, particularly in wealthier importing countries.

However, I believe the environmental cost of this convenience is substantial and frequently overlooked. Transporting food vast distances, often by air freight for perishable items, generates considerable carbon emissions that contribute directly to climate change, and this environmental cost is rarely reflected in the price consumers actually pay at checkout. Additionally, this global food system can undermine local agriculture in importing countries, as cheaper imported alternatives sometimes make it economically difficult for local farmers to compete, potentially threatening food security and rural livelihoods in the long term.

That said, this is not an inherent flaw of global trade itself but rather a consequence of how it is currently conducted; improvements such as more efficient shipping methods, stricter carbon pricing on imported goods, or a stronger consumer preference for genuinely seasonal, local produce when reasonably available could substantially reduce these environmental costs while still preserving many of global trade's genuine consumer benefits.

In conclusion, while global food trade offers real benefits in terms of variety and affordability, I believe its environmental costs currently make it, on balance, a negative development, though this could change considerably with more sustainable trade practices.

Examiner Notes

Task Response: Gives a clear, well-supported position with genuine acknowledgement of consumer benefits alongside a detailed explanation of the environmental and agricultural costs.

Coherence & Cohesion: Ideas progress logically from benefits to costs to a solution-oriented counterpoint, with cohesive devices ("however", "that said") managing each shift smoothly.

Lexical Resource: Wide range of precise vocabulary ("air freight", "undermine", "rural livelihoods") used with natural collocation throughout.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Wide range of complex structures, including concession clauses, used with full accuracy.

Band 8

252 words

Clearly argued with two distinct costs identified, just slightly more general in its supporting detail than a band 9 answer.

Modern supermarkets now stock food imported from all over the world, and while this brings real benefits to consumers, I believe the environmental costs make it, overall, a negative development.

There are clear benefits to this. Consumers can now access a much wider variety of foods all year round than they could if they only ate local, seasonal produce, and competition among global food producers has often helped keep prices lower, which benefits household budgets.

However, I believe the environmental cost is significant and often overlooked. Transporting food long distances, sometimes by air for foods that spoil quickly, produces a lot of carbon emissions that contribute to climate change, and this cost is not usually reflected in the price consumers pay. This global system can also make it harder for local farmers to compete with cheaper imported food, which can threaten local farming in the long run.

That said, this is not an unavoidable problem with global trade itself, but rather how it is currently done. Improvements such as more efficient shipping or people choosing more local, seasonal food when possible could reduce these environmental costs while keeping many of the benefits.

In conclusion, while global food trade offers real benefits in variety and price, I believe its environmental costs currently make it a negative development overall, although this could improve with more sustainable practices. Consumers themselves could also help by choosing local, seasonal food more often when it is genuinely available, rather than automatically reaching for imported alternatives out of habit.

Examiner Notes

Task Response: Gives a clear position with relevant reasoning on both sides, though the reasoning is slightly more general than the band 9 answer's.

Coherence & Cohesion: Clear five-paragraph structure with accurate cohesive devices throughout.

Lexical Resource: Good range of vocabulary, though "a lot of carbon emissions" is more general than the higher-band answer's more precise phrasing.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Mostly accurate complex sentences with only rare minor slips.

Band 7

250 words

A clear, well-reasoned position that would be stronger with the local farming impact developed further.

Nowadays, supermarkets sell food from all over the world. I think this is mostly a negative development.

There are some benefits to this. People can buy many different kinds of food all year round, and competition between countries can help keep prices lower for shoppers.

However, I think this causes environmental problems. Transporting food long distances, sometimes by plane, creates a lot of pollution that contributes to climate change. This can also make it hard for local farmers to compete with cheaper food from other countries.

This does not mean global food trade is always bad. If shipping became more efficient, or if people bought more local food when possible, this could reduce the environmental damage.

In conclusion, I think buying food from around the world has some benefits, but the environmental cost makes it mostly a negative development overall. Consumers themselves also have a role to play in reducing this problem, since choosing local and seasonal food when it is genuinely available can help reduce the amount of food that needs to travel long distances. Supermarkets could also help by clearly labelling where each product comes from, so that customers who care about the environment can make more informed choices when they shop, rather than simply assuming that all imported food has the same environmental cost regardless of how far it has actually travelled or how it was transported to reach the shelf. Governments could also support these efforts through policies that reward retailers for sourcing food more sustainably.

Examiner Notes

Task Response: Gives a clear position with relevant reasoning, but the environmental and farming impacts are not developed in as much depth as in the higher-band answers.

Coherence & Cohesion: Organised logically with benefits, costs, and counterpoint in separate paragraphs; cohesive devices ("However", "In conclusion") are accurate but predictable.

Lexical Resource: Adequate range for the task, with some repetition of "food" and "negative" throughout.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Generally accurate mix of simple and complex sentences; meaning is always clear.

Band 6.5

250 words

The position and reasoning are both clear, but agreement errors appear in almost every sentence.

Nowadays, supermarket sell food from all over the world. I think this is mostly negative development.

There is some benefit to this. People can buy many different kind of food all year round, and competition between country can help keep price lower for shopper.

However, I think this cause environmental problem. Transporting food long distance, sometimes by plane, create a lot of pollution that contribute to climate change. This can also make it hard for local farmer to compete with cheaper food from other country.

This does not mean global food trade is always bad. If shipping become more efficient, or if people buy more local food when possible, this could reduce the environmental damage.

In conclusion, I think buying food from around the world has some benefit, but the environmental cost make it mostly negative development overall. Consumer themselves also have a role to play in reducing this problem, since choosing local and seasonal food when it is genuinely available can help reduce the amount of food that need to travel long distance. Supermarket could also help by clearly labelling where each product come from, so that customer who care about the environment can make more informed choice when they shop, rather than simply assuming that all imported food has the same environmental cost regardless of how far it has actually travel or how it was transported to reach the shelf. Government could also support this effort through national policy that reward retailer for sourcing food more sustainably overall.

Examiner Notes

Task Response: Gives a clear position with relevant reasoning, matching the content of the band 7 answer, but grammar errors throughout reduce clarity.

Coherence & Cohesion: Follows the same five-part structure as the higher-band answers.

Lexical Resource: Limited by missing plurals on key task words ("country", "kind", "farmer") used throughout instead of their plural forms.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Frequent subject-verb agreement errors ("supermarket sell", "this cause", "cost make it") appear on nearly every sentence.

Band 4-5 - What to Avoid

34 words

States a position but never develops it with any evidence or example, and stays well under the required length.

I think buying food from other country is bad for environment.

But it is nice to have different food, this is good too.

It is difficult question, this is my opinion about this topic.

Examiner Notes

Task Response: States a position but gives only a single unsupported sentence with no real-world example or development of the argument. At well under 250 words, the response is also underlength.

Coherence & Cohesion: Reads as short, disconnected statements with minimal linking.

Lexical Resource: Vocabulary is basic and repetitive ("good", "nice", "difficult") with little variation.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Frequent errors throughout ("buying food from other country", "this is good too").

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